On A Sunny Day

So this is a super overdue piece for Caliguican ! I decided to be the backup for their backup even though I'm currently having quite a bit on my plate and not feeling super artistically motivated orz
The original piece was something I wasn't really happy with, it didn't feel like it had all the potential that I could've given it and so I was hesitant about even uploading it.
However, thanks to some encouraging words from friends, I decided I couldn't yet give up on it. I wondered about who I could ask, because something was clearly off about it, but my tired mind just couldnt quite figure out what,
but then I asked Kiire for help and oh my goodness, Kiire and BlazingBlackMage are just amazing. They've not only helped me see what I can improve about it, but they also took the time to edit my work (with permission) and
really adjusted the colors, lights and shadows in a way that I barely recognized my own work. Thank you so much for this, it was super motivating to read about all the improvements you made and seeing the comparison.
If anyone is interested in how this piece looked like before Kiire's & BBM improvements, here you go: Caliguican Old Version
It's crazy right? seriously, go watch these two, they deserve it ; v ;

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Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+20 AP (Conservatory Bonus)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (Other Esk Bonus: 10 AP * 2)
+20 AP (Esk Interaction Bonus: 10 AP * 2)
Total AP per submission: 90
(not taking double points because the event is long over and I feel bad hah)

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+4 GP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+5 GP (Conservatory Bonus)
Total GP per submission: 15 X2 (gift eskchange)
Total GP: 30 (for Caliguican's Pipkin)
Total GP: 15 (for Leafshadow's Butter)

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Art (c) Caliki (with edits from Kiire and BlazingBlackMage)
Characters (c) Caliguican and leafshadow04
Species (c) Witherlings

from DeviantArt: Popular https://ift.tt/2Eo6Hr0